Your life is itself a despairing expression of despair;You seem to create misery for and out of your self.
Why not look in the sky and breath the fragrant airs?
Maybe form wretchedness you could save your self.
From too much world and self-criticism, beware.
Why not sing and dance with the world instead?
Many people are offering you their love and care,
Open your arms, appreciate their presence
The world may have been unfair
In your heart and mind you have implanted hatred
But bare your soul naked, I dare
Maybe that way you’ll be liberated.
2 comments:
This one is the other side of you with sweet hope and boldness.
oh, hello danny!
did you know that this poem was originally written for you? Remember when I first posted it in your blog as a response to your poem ;-)
anyway, i just made some rivisions as i feel this one also applies to me...i can't help it - I'm a whinner.
good to have you around in here!
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